Tangle of Time

  

Tangle of Time
By  Gin Westcott

ISBN: 9781952435003
447 Pages
Available in Paperback, Audiobook, and on Kindle
Trigger Warning: Gore, Death, SA

Synopsis:

When four college kids are buried alive and there’s only one way out, don’t ask questions. Just survive.

After barely escaping a torturous series of undiscovered tunnels far beneath the Sierra foothills, Mae and her friends emerge, dehydrated and nearly dead from starvation. But everything Mae knows and loves is now gone. Through some bizarre tangle in time, they’ve been reeled back into the past. To a time that, according to Mae—“is constipated with antiquated gender inequality.” With danger lurking behind every tree and no easy way home, they must begin adapting to their new surroundings before it’s too late. So, when struck with an unexpected opportunity, Mae is faced with the difficult choice of returning to her own time or living out the greatest adventure of her life and carving her own path in history. Gin Westcott’s debut novel is BOOK ONE in the unique Tangle of Time series that will take you through an exciting, historical, and romantic adventure that you won’t be able to put down.

My Thoughts:

When I read the synopsis for Tangle of Time, I was intrigued. I typically enjoy time travel and "character out of time" style books, so the premise sounded interesting enough for me to give it a shot. Unfortunately, the reality was not what one would hope. The story is a tangle alright - it felt like the author wasn't quite sure what genre or audience they were writing for. The book is a jumble of trashy romance novel with slice of life elements and action adventure that do not flow together to make one cohesive story, making it feel fractured, and this book clocks in at a completely unnecessary 100 chapters. What do I mean by unnecessary? Let me break it down. 

The first four chapters are all, I suppose, character establishing backstory. Except none of what is revealed in them really plays much into the story later. It focuses too much on each of the four lead characters' parents/families that we will never hear about ever again, making the point to make each one of them unnecessarily quirky in some way. Apparently in their world there is no such thing as a normal family. It also establishes the not very likable leads themselves, using a plethora of clichés and what could be seen as blatant cultural stereotypes. These first chapters are also rife with out of place sexual commentary, with the men constantly objectifying women (and sometimes judging other men), a romance obsessed mother lying on dating profiles to snag a man, and multiple sexual conversations and acts between two of the leads. The next three chapters are somewhat setting up the story that is to come, by sending them to the job that is the catalyst for the time travel. This is the core "trashy romance novel with slice of life elements" part of the book.

Finally, on chapter eight, the story shifts towards the action adventure part and it reads like a completely different book. This is where you learn about the circumstance which leads into the story the synopsis is actually selling you. Almost. They still haven't experienced the time travel by the end of the chapter. In fact, the next twelve chapters are just about them traveling through the tunnels mentioned in the synopsis. What took two lines for the preview to explain took TWENTY chapters to reach in the book itself. 

Once out of the caverns, injured and greatly malnourished, the leads finally encounter other people who hopefully can help them. When they should be grateful, what they choose instead is to be arrogant, demanding, and to mock the people they encounter, further diminishing any little likability they may have had. No real person is going to go two weeks without actual food then get a bowl of stew set in front of them and go "no thanks, I'm vegetarian." I mean, really? But that's how holier-than-thou the one character was written.  At one point she scolded another character for littering - for dropping one cigarette butt in the cavern miles under the ground. 

Not only are they arrogant and demanding, but they are over the top obtuse. The next seven chapters cover their experience with the first family they encounter, who lives in a log cabin with no modern amenities, and the whole time the protagonists' commentary is about their "costumes" and "rustic living lifestyle." They get brought to a local native tribe and determine that these people are "quite diligent in embracing their Native American roots,” instead of going "yeah, maybe this is an actual native tribe." Any sane person would have by now realized that THEY were the ones out of place.

Okay, lets add one more paragraph here on the rest of the story (only 73 more chapters) or this review will end up miles long. Actually, I think I'm good for now. I just can't.

If I sat here and nitpicked everything that bothered me about Tangle of Time, I would probably be here all day. But there is one more thing I really want to address. This entire story is hyper focused on sex and steeped in flagrant sexism, to a degree that made me outright uncomfortable. The synopsis mentioned "antiquated gender inequality" so I had expectation of some reference to it, but not to the degree that it is, and in a way that is so distasteful. As previously mentioned, the early chapters are heavy with it. The book establishes its ideal of gender roles and perpetuated stereotypes right from the start, with lead guy Greg fixing his car with the patronizingly insignificant assistance of his girlfriend who is notably wearing her four inch heels, and then he calls her babe and squeezes her butt. In the following chapter another male lead both mocks a man for being out of shape (despite being unfit himself) and then ogles and objectifies his female teacher. Everything just goes downhill from there. I thought at this point that the book HAD to have been written by a man, so when I checked and saw that not only was the writer a woman, but one whose profile claims that she is "passionate about gender equality," I was absolutely floored. This book reads like something written by a hormonally charged teenage boy, all sex and swear words. This book was sold to readers as "look how bad things were in the past" but the inequality doesn't start when the characters are in the past, rather it is solidly present throughout the entire book, just masked in the modern times as being "quirky" parental behaviors or "romantic" actions (that are not at all romantic). This book is a master class on how to not portray gender equality, and fails the Bechdel-Wallace test in the most disturbing way possible.

The main (synopsis) concept of Tangle of Time had such potential, and with the help of another writer or a good editor, maybe it would have been glorious. However with the insufferable characters, unnecessarily drawn out story, and all the other questionable content mentioned above, it was such a massive letdown and I'm sad that I kept it in my reading queue for as long as I did, just to be disappointed in such a manner. All of the promotional materials designate this book as book one in a series, but in the four years since it's release, I have seen no mention of book two. The author could still be writing it, though I am more inclined to believe that the series was abandoned after the poor reception of this introductory volume. 

I won a complimentary copy of Tangle of Time from the Library Thing Early Reviewers program, in exchange for a fair and honest review. All opinions contained within this review are my honest thoughts.

Parent's Guide:

I definitely wouldn't recommend this book for kids. It is filled from front to back with references to sex and drugs, as well as abuse and other questionable topics. An older teen may find something enjoyable - in the way that "edgy cartoons" are, but they would probably lose interest before the actual story anyways.